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Submitted: October 20, 2007
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still trying to get my legs back. It's almsot unsettling how much I dislike what I have produced recently; seems mostly at times like I can't get what I want onto the page at all - the most irritating part of this being that I've been keeping up with sketchbooks, but it's almost like some things have managed to attrophy even while practicing.

<growl> anyways, tones are too large once the page is shrunk down (that's the biggest complaint) I think If I am going to use penciled images for pages I am going to have to start using the same coloring techniques I use on other images rather than using the tones - theres just too much fo a clash when I mix the two.

And yes; this introduction thingy is actually just me practicing and working the stiffness out of my page-making muscles so to speak :3 With any luck I'll be done making stuff Im going to complain about by the end of it.

That way I can always go back and just redo it: yeah I know I don't have a spectacular track record for that sort of thing - but we are only talking about three pages here.

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I should really have put a disclamer about drafts and spelling errors. And ho the two go hand in hand. The text is only there so you can see what's going on and I can measure out the space needed for the captions - don't try to proofread something that is rough; it's futile. And moderately annoying.
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~Kyoshin523:iconKyoshin523: Oct 20, 2007, 10:49:47 PM
i love how it looks:D good job man just one thing i gotta say. *whisper* look at panel 3 abck im pretty sure you meant back=P and no im not a grammar nazi

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*Icymasamune:iconIcymasamune: Oct 20, 2007, 10:50:41 PM
you mean abck isnt a real word? well crap, that must be a bum dictionary >_>

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~Kyoshin523:iconKyoshin523: Oct 20, 2007, 10:51:23 PM
XD o maybe im wrong then let me go look it up

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*Icymasamune:iconIcymasamune: Oct 20, 2007, 10:55:11 PM
:3 fixed, thank you ^^

One of the problems with doing the lettering at the last layer; is that I have often lost mojo at that point and don't double check what I am doing. Much like when I post comments :D

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~sir-lothar:iconsir-lothar: Oct 21, 2007, 5:15:55 AM
also in the the third panel i think its forward, but then again im not sure,

the story looks very interesting, i will be waiting for the next page
~Artificer-Urza:iconArtificer-Urza: Oct 21, 2007, 6:43:11 AM
I really hope to see more of this and everything you draw, really. :thumbsup:

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*CaptRosko:iconCaptRosko: Oct 21, 2007, 7:30:52 AM
The story seems interesting so far. You misspelled deceased in the first caption, by the way. I hear that photoshop can convert images into halftone, but I don't have the full version of photoshop so I can't comment on how effective that is. Open canvas has some simple dot tone patterns you can use too. The trial is free. Hope that might help?

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~Kyoshin523:iconKyoshin523: Oct 21, 2007, 12:07:19 PM
no problems:D the part i care about most is the art and its rockin' ^^

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=BlueBerserker:iconBlueBerserker: Oct 21, 2007, 1:27:11 PM
"anyways, tones are too large once the page is shrunk down (that's the biggest complaint)"
oh? :0
Im not really familiar with what youre talking, but by judging the way you do comics and the looks of this one in particular, I'll take my chances by guessing you do it in Deleter? I dont know. >__>;
maybe its too naive of me to suggest this but, Have you tried to save the jpeg first then shrink it on PS? I mean- if you really are into tones and such ( cause i like tones, and im very into weave intrincate, yet unnecessary ways to render artwork.). Anywho nice stuff as always. (: